| Saturday, 3rd October, 2009 Glowing Doohicky Looking back at this page one week after I completed it, I realized that panel 4 is terrible! It's okay composition-wise, but from a story-telling perspective it gives you the impression that Corey suddenly acquired Mr Fantastic powers. I plan on redrawing that panel, most likely split it up into 2 panels to give it a better flow, but I won't be updating the website version of this page. Any fixed pages will go into whatever special edition I have planned for Crux. What do I have planned? I have some idea, but I want to finish this chapter before finalizing anything. I guess the reason why I chose this panel is because of the doo-hickey Corey is holding. I got the idea that Corey carries around a magical light instead of a boring candle/lantern. You know, to show off his magical capabilities. I originally had the idea of a floating orb around him, a shout out to Net's other comic Tales of the Travelling Gnome, but Net said Dottiar had a floating orb because he had nothing to imbue the spell with. And when I stumbled onto pictures of Victorian poison balls (little ball containers to keep your pills in), I thought it would be neat if it was a light holder. The ball is compact, has a little gem to be imbued with a light spell, and if Corey needed to kill the light in a hurry, he just snaps the ball shut. I think it's a great combination of Ingam's doodads and Corey's magic, personally. :P Alice's slay . Vote for this page's sketch and 3D render.  |
| Sheela: | Lies! Lies and slander! He's way to awake for sleepies now! |
| Humbug: | Uh, he will be very soon? XD |
| Sheela: | He aint sleepin' though ! |
| Humbug: | Coz it's more comfy to sleep without any pants on? :P |
| Sheela: | Dunno .. but that would only make it worse. Also, why isn't he wearing pants ? |
| Humbug: | What makes you think Garwin has never seen Corey's hair when it's down before? ;) |
| Sheela: | Yeah - Unless he too is a mullet fetishist! @.@ |
| Alice: | I know that when his loverboy sees what his hair really looks like he's going to shriek in terror, that's all I can say. |
| Sheela: | Hah, modern day teenagers can stop loving someone over a small thing such as a wrong colored iPod ! |
| Humbug: | Or it could be that the hair has nothing to do with it, it's a whacky hairstyle at, but since when has bad hair not made you like a person? :P |
| Sheela: | Maybe, secretly, the elf girlie is A MULLET FETISHIST!! *gasp* |
| Humbug: | Scary mullet, hehe! XD |
| Sheela: | *hides from the mullet* I don't understand why elf girlie likes him with that mullet?! It's scary! |
| Humbug: | I don't remember the word count because I wasn't the one who set it up. I think I'll ask my coder to increase it some more if possible. And yes, everyone fear Corey's mullet. :P |
| Sheela: | Oh, and yes, there's a limit to the length of a message. I wish it would show how many characters you had left, like on youtube. |
| Sheela: | That's why hs'e so grim - He's got a mullet !! Off to the barber boy, and get that head shaved! |
| anonymous: | That is one nasty mullet! |
| Wolf Kerl: | Is there a restriction to how long a comment has to be? When ever I post something it doesn't show up, and in my http bar I get a #error after the end of the address. Am I doing something wrong? |
| Humbug: | Perhaps he senses that something is wrong? :P |
| Sheela: | Oy... he looks grim! Why? did someone eat his cookies ? |
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